Oma Mohney
Saturday, November 12, 2011
What do you think about this sonnet that i wrote?
the only thing is out doesnt rhyme with fried like it should. line 3 only has 9 syllables. and line 9 doesnt make much sense. u just used "the" to add a syllable. try an adjective instead?
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